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| Search found 4 matches |
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 Topic: Chapter 2, The Netherlands |
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| quix0te Replies: 0 Views: 65 |
 Forum: Mark Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 5:11 am Subject: Chapter 2, The Netherlands |
| Rewriting the last half so she isn't just showing up after everything has happened. | |
| Topic: Chapter 1, Finland, V 1.1 |
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| quix0te Replies: 1 Views: 64 |
Forum: Mark Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2014 3:31 am Subject: Chapter 1, Finland, V 1.1 |
| I really liked the idea of having the exposition unfold at the dinner party instead of leading up to it. Then, as I wrote, I realized I have very minimal experience with dinner parties.
See how t ... |
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| Topic: Exposition! Action! Finland! |
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| quix0te Replies: 3 Views: 114 |
Forum: Mark Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 7:25 pm Subject: Exposition! Action! Finland! |
| Yeah. I think your idea of starting from the dinner party is a solid one. I think the russia-finland exposition can be shrunk. Simon's youth can be loaded into another place in the book. I do want ... | |
| Topic: Exposition! Action! Finland! |
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| quix0te Replies: 3 Views: 114 |
Forum: Mark Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2014 3:59 am Subject: Exposition! Action! Finland! |
| Looking for:
grammatical errors I missed language that seems to go 'clunk' paragraphs that seem to go 'snoooore' Do I upload or include it as inline text? Going with the latter. Tweaked th ... |
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